Because I will be away from WordPress for the next week for fun things, I thought I would combine three posts into one; a three verse haiku. This first haiku verse is in response to Haiku Horizons prompt “try”; the second is ‘freelance’; and the third verse was inspired by RonovanWrites Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt Challenge #27 Joy&Freedom ( please note that I did not use both words).
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One learns early on,
to try is admirable.
Two dreams meld as one.
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The sun is asleep;
room lights are dark for the night.
My mind kisses you.
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My heart sings with joy,
my feelings float so alive.
In her dreams I dwell.
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Please visit both blogs to see the other haikus. And please note that I will not be able to read your posts or respond to comments while I am offline for fun things.
(The haiku is copyright, Steven S. Walsky, January 2015, all rights reserved.)
I think you have the essence of Freedom in the lines. I can see ‘my feelings float so alive’ as an image of being free from a lot of things.
Thanks, much appreciated, glad you liked the haiku.
What a beautiful trio of haiku to leave us with! Thank you !
Thank You! Debbie!
Such a natural and lovely flow of haiku, Steve… I really enjoy seeing how much you can reveal in just 3 lines.
“My mind kisses you”…quite a phrase that will stay on the back of…my mind. 🙂
Thank you for the very nice comment Ese; glad you liked the haiku.
The sun is asleep;
room lights are dark for the night.
My mind kisses you.
That is wonderfully elegant. Well done!.
Thank you, much appreciated.
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